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Down the Pathway

Into the forest, the pathway winds, traveled in secret, so many times. Forbidden love, that cannot be, he waits, he waits for me. Stealing moments, after dark, scared, and trembling, memorizing every part. Under the stars, beneath the trees, together as one, where no one sees. Together in harmony, as a poets masterpiece, in perfect rhythm, setting love free. Tomorrow will bring, another night, down the pathway, where love feels so right.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/2/2009 6:39:00 AM
I love the pathway and the journey of this writeLove the fourth stanza..the poem flows so well and leaves me smiling and wanting more at the end. Happy New Year, Chris.
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Date: 1/2/2009 6:31:00 AM
A beautiful pathway to love. Happiness in this wonderful write within the freedom of love's beauty and passion. Awesome poem with lovely imagery. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/2/2009 6:26:00 AM
Christy, this is wonderful as it so well describes the attraction and feelings for another, though forbidden, but most fantasy usually is and that's why fantasy works so well for inspiring great poetry like this. Michael
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Date: 1/2/2009 4:15:00 AM
So cool, with lovely imagry, well done. :) Love, Kristin
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Date: 1/2/2009 2:27:00 AM
Christy I really liked waking up to this one, it gave my first smile of the day. Laurie
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Date: 1/1/2009 7:37:00 PM
Christy this was a beautiful poem, it flowed so smoothly, like I was walking down the pathway. Beautiful job my friend. Blessings and Happy New Year! ~Michaela~
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