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Down Down Deeper and Down

Treading water, standing still.. Fighting with the current's. I'm drowning in the water.. I' grasping for some air.. Hold your breath and wait a minute.. They're surely be some help.. But deeper still I sink.. So far out of my depth.. The surface seems so far away.. There's darkness all around.. The silence is so frightening. And I cannot hear a sound. I'm heading for the bottom to join the other wreck's.. Laying down below a coldness fills the air.. My soul is drifting from my soul and floating to the Surface. I take my final breath and settle on the seabed..

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Date: 6/4/2012 6:30:00 AM
don't give up,fight the current of life,God will trow you a life jacket,nice write Stephen
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