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Down! Down!

the deer stampeded down our cross street 8:30 pm July 6th all alone, running his new antlers high and mighty so beautiful in the dusk fast primal beautiful color we all happened to be on the front lawn and oh the dog THE DOG he took off like a shot prey drive fully engaged in the three seconds my brain needed to sort it out I yelled DOWN! DOWN! and he dropped. thank God he dropped Just before he did I saw him considering that electric fence but he wanted that deer and I confess I wanted him to have a good chase I wanted him to have a hunt but I wont sacrifice him to the cars on the busy street We all stood looking at each other was that a mirage amid the fireflies I heard hooves he was moving, something scared him before he got to us no the dog panting tongue hanging nose to the air he knew he knew what he saw It was perfect.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/9/2009 3:14:00 PM
Amazing form! Great eye caather.
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Date: 7/8/2009 11:17:00 AM
Beautiful. I don't know what else to say. It's just... beautiful. Perfect indeed.
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