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Down At the End

Down at the end Cold – winds – blow . . . my skin is bitter In – the – snow . . . an empty quitter Take – the – pain . . . of endless trying Bring – the – rain, rain, rain There is a place down at the ending of this road Where I can go to let my lonely heart explode Come – a – long . . . the crying enter Hear – my – song . . . half past the center Touch – the – sun . . . the heat is drying Bring – the – rain, rain, rain There is a place down at the ending of this road Where I can go to let my lonely heart explode Around the bend in every field as I unload There is a place down at the ending of this road There stands a barren tree Its branches point at me It only hopes to see Rain, rain, rain There is a place down at the ending of this road Where I can go to let my lonely heart explode Around the bend in every field is where I spend There is a place down at the end ……………. 12/30/16 Inspired by Nicola Byrnes: The Poet's Choice - The End Of The Road - Just Friends Poetry Contest I won’t be entering it though, I don’t believe it is the correct form for the contest. I just had a melody in my head that needed something written to it before it drove me nuts. : )

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Date: 12/31/2016 10:20:00 AM
DONTCHAJUSTLUVIT....when the muse starts humming in the background and your fingers start screaming...DANCE WITH HER....DANCE WITH HER.....
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Chris Green
Date: 1/3/2017 11:11:00 AM
Thanks so much John. I appreciate your enthusiastic comments today. :)
Date: 12/30/2016 2:08:00 PM
Excellent Chris. I would like to hear that on piano!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2016 3:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi, if I record it I will let you hear it.
Date: 12/30/2016 12:45:00 PM
There are a few people here that perhaps would put it to music for you, your lyrics, but perhaps you don't want that :) It was enjoyable though, the way you wrote that down, I could follow the rhythm :) Just don't elt your heart explode, who else will write early morning coffee and love songs....
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Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2016 3:14:00 PM
We'll see. :)
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Darren White
Date: 12/30/2016 12:59:00 PM
You are!! Ohh, will you put something on Soup then? A song? Like Wesley and Mark Massey? I LOVE that :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2016 12:56:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend. I am also a songwriter/musician and had the melody prior to writing these lyrics. And don't worry, I don't plan on letting it explode anytime soon. : )
Date: 12/30/2016 11:20:00 AM
I can almost hear a tune in this lyric poem. Did you have a one in your mind when you wrote it? It's very good....a song
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Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2016 11:25:00 AM
I did and I sung this prior to posting, just to make sure it fit like I wanted it to. The melody found me as I drove to work this morning and the first thing I did was write lyrics to it before it disappeared. :) But, if you hear a melody as well, I am sure yours is much better than mine. Thanks so very much Dane Ann
Date: 12/30/2016 10:39:00 AM
There's something about rain ... just makes me feel good somehow, even if it matches a lonely feeling. I love this Chris. You've expressed loneliness in a powerful way. I think this would make a great song.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2016 10:52:00 AM
Thanks so much Rebecca for your wonderful comment. The rain has always been an inspiration to me and though I enjoy the rain, today the inspiration became sadness, though I am anything but. :) I am happy you enjoyed this piece.
Date: 12/30/2016 10:23:00 AM
I like the rhythm of this piece. You really make it an engaging read.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2016 10:51:00 AM
Thanks so very much Forrest, I am happy you liked this one. I wasn't too sure about posting it.
Date: 12/30/2016 9:54:00 AM
May rain flood every lonely heart that 's dry...I love the rain..for some poeple it gives them a bad mood..but listening to the.rain..feeling the rain...soaking in the rain or just watching it..makes me smile..Hope many will feel this way too.Am touched with the sad feeling here Chris...
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Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2016 10:51:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend, I too am quite fond of the rain. I know that it does bring sadness to some, but it also brings life to so much which in turn brings beauty. Just as your beautiful comments come to me.
Date: 12/30/2016 9:54:00 AM
I love this musical melody, Chris :) Hugs Eve
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Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2016 10:49:00 AM
Thank so very much Eve, I am thrilled you do.

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