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“Stay away, I can’t afford to be sick. Hand sanitizer please, and make it quick! I can’t have the flu,” I moaned as I puked - “I’m out of Tylenol, Nyquil, and Vics!” 12/30/11 For "Sneezing Limerick" contest

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Date: 1/10/2012 10:53:00 PM
hey, didn't this one win? I really liked it, Susan!! WEll, here I am again, late as usual. I need to do some other things. It will be forever until I can get to my shows. DANG. SEe ya tomorrow. LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/2/2012 3:20:00 PM
Situation is an alter ego. With a hidden identity. To explain I had to choose between her and someone else. I chose else.
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Date: 12/30/2011 7:49:00 PM
i can't have the flu; thats the most important thing in the world to me now. T. S.
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Date: 12/30/2011 2:29:00 PM
Ha Ha! This is a great Limerick Susan! Perfect for the contest...you will do well!! Awesome Work!
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Date: 12/30/2011 1:38:00 PM
Good going, Susan!! Your meter is pretty good too! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/30/2011 11:47:00 AM
Ohhhh myyyy!! This is good. A delightful read !!! God Bless you !!!
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