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Down She is very down today The pain in her eyes is very disturbing, I can’t control myself She is very young to experience this kind of pain My only way to help her now is to pick her up She has lost her soul. Her pride has been taken away from her She was just a young innocent child with love and much of it to share How can the world be so cruel to her? How the worlds can let this happen How can woman still have a child and hold it on their arms Forget all the troubles in the world and forget about this girl Her life will be nothing but darkness The evil that has been brought to this world is unforgivable. The world has became a beast that eats us all away Takes our virgin souls and eats us alive She was a young virgin; raped by men she called uncle The world has became selfish, disarming, rude and foolish Words are hopeless to this world An answer will be answered soon A glorious Monday morning will be glorified.

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Date: 5/21/2010 7:47:00 PM
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