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Dove's Soft Call

dove's soft call at dawn from the budding apple tree the smell of coffee

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Kim Merryman

Date: 2/25/2012 10:14:00 AM

I love this scene. Congrats on your win, Barbara! Love, Kim

Kash Poet

Date: 2/24/2012 6:15:00 AM

Wonderful haiku by you Barbara.Congrats on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2012 5:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Charles' Haiku contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/24/2012 5:09:00 AM

Oh Barbara! Now this my kind of haiku!! Greatest juxto on the list bc I believe coffee and nature go hand in hand for me too!!! Congrats on this one! Saving it for my favs....pass the cream and sugar!! Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song
Date: 2/24/2012 5:10:00 AM

typos typos...this IS...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2012 8:54:00 PM

I loved it the first time. BIG congrats, BARBARA

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/23/2012 5:52:00 PM

very very nice Barb! I especially like when a second sense is brought in! Congrad's on your win Light & love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2012 11:10:00 PM

this really makes a sweet mild picture for me. Love it.

Jack Horne

Date: 2/21/2012 2:31:00 PM

beautiful haiku, Barbara - love the clever coffee line

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/20/2012 10:37:00 AM

transfered to the odour of your wonderful coffee, Barbara, love this the poem creates a awesome picture. harry

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/20/2012 9:03:00 AM

lovely haiku

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/20/2012 4:03:00 AM

Thank you...good haiku Barbara. - oxox love Anne-Lise