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Double Vision

shining through branches laden with weight of silence moon mirrored your eyes then weaved laces of moonlight over the face of the pond out of hope entwined we looked for what we had lost searching among stars groping for a chance to feel tomorrow under our feet

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/30/2014 2:48:00 PM

Oh lordy me Carrie...'groping for a chance to feel tomorrow under our feet'?? That just isn't fair! SO honored to share a top spot with you although mine seems like a nursery rhyme next to yours...Keep amazing me okay? - Tim

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/29/2014 2:30:00 AM

Congratulations for your win and fine work Carrie! ^_^

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/29/2014 1:26:00 AM

Dropping back to congratulate for the great win, Carrie

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/28/2014 6:15:00 PM

Congratulations, Carrie, on this stunning portrayal of hope; flow is beautiful.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/28/2014 5:35:00 PM

Congratulations Carrie on your excellent win... Verlena

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/28/2014 4:47:00 PM

Thank you all, for the lovely comments, I'm not sure why this poem's comments are not coming through as usual...something strange has happened, with just this poem....but thanks everyone!

Skat A

Date: 8/28/2014 4:43:00 PM

nice win, Carrie.......SKAT

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/28/2014 1:59:00 PM

really really good. Congrats on your first place win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2014 1:51:00 PM

Carrie, Congrats on your "Hope, Faith and Love Tanka" win. Love Linda

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 8/28/2014 12:32:00 PM

Congratulations. Very beautiful poem. Brenda

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/28/2014 11:42:00 AM

Beautiful Carrie. I don't know if this will post. It appears you turned off your comments.

Carrie Richards
Date: 8/28/2014 4:49:00 PM

I'm not sure what has happened here, Carolyn, all my other poems are as usual......but this one, the comments are looking all weird! But thank you so much for your support, and kindness !!