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Double Valentine Haiku Plus One Questionku

chilled bottle of wine stockings hung over her chair candle lights the way naked on his bed she pretends to be asleep a valentine treat he comes to her a single red rose will she be satisfied? For Linda's Contest haiku 575 questionku 456 ending with a question.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2015 6:27:00 PM

hmmm, let's hope they are both satisfied!! I was satisfied reading this treat. Congrats on your great win.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/22/2015 3:36:00 PM

Pleased to be back with deserved congratulations, Richard! Well done. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/22/2015 1:43:00 PM

RICAHRD, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/9/2015 8:58:00 AM

You set the scene for romance and filled the air with a sense of hesitancy. Simply stunning!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 5:46:00 PM

That's what I was going for, I'm glad it came across!

Constance La France

Date: 2/8/2015 2:04:00 PM

Richard, another sexy write, I love it for that, so romantic and intense, well done and best of luck in the contest, and thanks for the visit ~~

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 5:46:00 PM

Thanks for the visit and luck.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/8/2015 4:37:00 AM

reading this Richard, i think any girl would be...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2015 9:30:00 AM

;0) thanks Harry!

Justin Bordner

Date: 2/8/2015 1:46:00 AM

A woman won't ignore a man whose passion has known none other like her before. Wonderful poem of love play Richard. J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2015 9:29:00 AM

Thanks Justin.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/7/2015 2:53:00 PM

It's been a very busy day, Richard. Church, lunch with family, rest, and then outing with friends and family...just got home. Read this on my phone, but wanted to be calm so I could post. Stunning imagery. Satisfaction comes when you know you are loved despite....everything. Lovely...wishing you the best in the contest.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/7/2015 4:08:00 PM

Thanks Eileen, I had a bit of fun writing this one. I hadn't written a questionku in a long time so I was pleased to see Linda incorporate the form into her latest contest.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 2/7/2015 2:26:00 PM

Very nice Richard. I have enjoyed reading this poem... Verlena

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/7/2015 2:27:00 PM

Thanks Verlena. ;0)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/7/2015 2:26:00 PM

So nice to have you back Michael, I had been a bit concerned. Thanks for the thoughtful visit.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/7/2015 10:07:00 AM

A perfect atmosphere for a valentine day! Oh , yes, she will be when love in the heart, dear Richard! Very romantic and eloquent! Good luck plus a seven!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/7/2015 2:28:00 PM

Wow, thanks again for another 7! Have awonderful weekend my friend.