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"double Standard Logic"

Do you believe there is this conceive A double standing meander? In this world of current strife Actions and words cuts as a knife? Would you change it if you could Is it not plain that you should? Do you not know from whence it came If you did would you take the blame? Would you hang your head in shame And live up to your Savior’s name? Love’s tree of life is not to blame And to blame a devil is very lame! Rather you blame a serpent in a tree Or would you rather be made free? Tempted to believe in a natural fruit `Tis Eve’s good and evil needs the boot! For `Tis the double standard meander The brain the goose the mind it’s gander! This is a very important truth Straight from Moses’ Love booth Feed me of Love from source above Give me feedback, my Poet Soups of Love! Smile! 1-8-10 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 2/5/2010 6:19:00 PM

It is so much easier to say "I am a Christian" than to live and act as a Christian should. In spite of all we've done, He still awaits with open arms. Love and understanding can do more than modern medicine to cure the world. Vince

P Sheart

Date: 1/16/2010 3:03:00 PM

Hi John, My mind goes many places with this one! I love your play on words coupled with your rhyme makes this a fun read. Very thought provoking!Love Light Patty

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/14/2010 7:19:00 AM

Enjoyed reading today, meander and gander threw me, though. I like the love booth.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2010 12:36:00 PM

What is good for the goose is good for the gander. But when the brain is the goose and the mind is the gander that is a mess,Huh. The question is are we in control of our mind, is the Spirit in control of our mind, or is satan in control of our mind? How do we get in control of our mind with the Holy Spirit totally in charge? Keep the creative pen flowing to keep up on our toes of thinking. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work for you are right on on most. Sara

Kim Hilliker

Date: 1/9/2010 12:06:00 AM

You're right on Moses. We are responsible for our own actions and non-actions. Thanks for sharing.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2010 11:32:00 PM

Moses' love booth, now THAT one made ME laugh, john! Yes, I hate double standards, dear john. And you tell it straight from your heart. LUv ya, Andrea

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/8/2010 11:25:00 PM

Blame others never solves problems. The conscience always guides us to do what is right, but it is not always so easy to follow, the body being the antagonist. Thanks for sharing a thought provoking write. Love and blessings, Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/8/2010 8:11:00 PM

SOUP MAIL REPLY....IMPORTANT...

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 1/8/2010 7:11:00 PM

Certainly a message we can all take to heart. Thank you for you kind words on my Christmas Acrostic also. ~Trudy~

Marty Owens

Date: 1/8/2010 6:59:00 PM

Very wonderful message...enjoyed...Marty

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 1/8/2010 3:10:00 PM

Another fabulous uplifting piece you have penned here Moses. Powerful message conveyed! Thanks so much for sharing! Have a blessed day~Mary

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/8/2010 2:52:00 PM

And as it should be because your poems are always uplifting, inspirational, encouraging! Great job, my dear friend, Johnmoses Freeman!! Thank you for all the feedback you've given me since I've been back in the Soup! Peace, Audrey