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Written on October 2, 2023

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Risk Falling Into him, Mysterious Insight embracing Feelings, exciting hearts Flames in bold scarlet, rising Like the morning startling the night Freeing the soul from its darkness, love Erasing all worries, the tears destroyed By winds of yesterday’s grace, subsiding Providing the nerve and strength needed The dream traps doubt in its clutches Freeing the mind to believe, Feeling beyond our grasp, Light falling softly, Pleading whispers Insights, stars Twinkling Fears

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Date: 10/12/2023 8:06:00 AM
Precarious foothold - have faith. :) Congratulations Gina! :)
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Date: 10/11/2023 11:09:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Gina ... beautiful and deep emotions :) - hugs
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Date: 10/11/2023 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 10/11/2023 10:04:00 AM
“The dream traps doubt in its clutches” a very deep line that is and more! Meaningful etheree that conveys such uplifting and soulful thoughts in a flawless manner! Whilst ensuring your syllables remain intact throughout! Well delivered as always! Your way with words is stunning! Congratulations on winning. Pleasure reading
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Date: 10/2/2023 10:09:00 AM
How well you constructed this Etheree. Resembles a tear from my poor eyes. Blessings.
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Date: 10/2/2023 7:59:00 AM
a well crafted poem both visually and emotionally. A beautiful Etheree! I love the uplifting and spiritual nature of your poem 'erasing all worries, the tears destroyed.' is just one of many outstanding lines. You're gifted. Am faving it...have a great day, Sara
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Date: 10/2/2023 7:02:00 AM
Gorgeous emotionally and visually.
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Date: 10/2/2023 6:01:00 AM
So emotive! Very nice, Gina!
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