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Double Haiku (I Think)

I can’t keep in mind, things immediately past. Vapors, in a flash. But I can narrate, who, where, when and what I did forty years ago!

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John Pen

Date: 5/23/2014 4:53:00 AM

It happens to all of us. I remember in detail things that happened twenty years ago but can't remember where I put my car keys twenty minutes ago

Skat A

Date: 5/22/2014 11:16:00 AM

John,, Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Hope you are enjoying the exposure. Hugs & Love ~SKAT~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/9/2010 11:20:00 AM

John, It is amazing how that happens...Thanks for the comments on my work...Yes C,D,E are natural and a sharp is followed by a flat..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara