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Double Faced

These days I’ve been Feeling sad I feel something akin Inside of me that is bad I fake a smile From time to time They never thought for a while Will he be able to climb? My wounds don’t bleed So they think that I’m happy With these words that I knead My end is near so don’t worry

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Serge Comeau

Date: 4/16/2011 5:45:00 AM

my times of sorrow

Michael Gelb

Date: 4/9/2011 7:10:00 AM

Your poem is nice. Thank you for comment to my poem.

Samantha Drummond

Date: 4/8/2011 4:00:00 PM

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Akunna Olomi

Date: 4/8/2011 3:44:00 PM

Serge, you made me envision how painful and dangerous wounds that don't bleed are. The sufferers barely recieve sympathy, yet they die fast. Thank you for the thoughtful, poetic piece. Welcome to poetrysoup!

Roxanna Johnson

Date: 4/8/2011 3:30:00 PM

I love your last stanza "My wounds don't bleed so they think that I'm happy." That's my favorite(: I enjoyed the whole poem as well.