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Double Duty Shredded Wheat

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These rectangles of wheat, that looks rather dashing You smother with milk, then fun comes with smashing! They give morning a boost ! Or can make a good roof…. In case of storm, when the house takes a thrashing! I can stack them in rows on the roof, with my spouse We will snack as we go, (a few tucked in my blouse) Our breakfast a treat ! The morning complete ! The tummy is filled, plus a new roof on the house!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/27/2012 4:29:00 PM
They still taste better than they tar.
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Date: 10/9/2011 12:15:00 AM
Great write Carrie! I just love the fact you chose this cereal...There are so many of us that eat that cereal every morning, yum! Stupendous poem!!
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Date: 10/8/2011 8:27:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “Tis Something Sooo Very Beautiful About You My Dear Precious & Beautiful Carrie! *^_^* I Am Not Quite Certain As Unto Why But, Your Beauty Is Just Sooo Lovely &, I Loved Your Cute & Funny Poe Yet, How Many Would Give Their Heart, for A Bowl of Wheat to Feed The Ones They Love!? *^_^* Ahhh, Something About You That, Makes My Own Heart, Pitter Patter, My Dear Beautiful Carrie!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *
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Date: 10/8/2011 7:40:00 PM
would like to sup on yer roof! dig the write, Carrie. beauty eve and Namaste~N
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Date: 10/8/2011 6:38:00 PM
hahaha, comparing them to roofing material That is just how they taste to me! Great one, Carrie.
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