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Dotty Doggy Duo

Dotty doggy duo, daily derring-do, descending leaves decorating yard, Beau-black as coal, brown-eyed batty Gus, barking brazenly, bounding, both bonkers? a boisterous, "You betcha!" Kings of calamity- canines of chaos, squirrels scurry for sweet sanity, scolding silver September acorn gatherers, sedulously seeking sedatives!

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Howard Kerr

Date: 2/3/2024 11:30:00 PM

Regina, I am completely overawed by this absolutely awe-inspiring apt alliteration. Congratulations on reaching the semi-final on the FamilyFriend poetry website. In sincerity I hope your work will be chosen as the outright winner Warmth and support Howard

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/23/2024 6:48:00 AM

creative use of alliteration, Regina. It worked and described the ensuing chaos quite well...have a pleasant day, Sara

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/22/2024 3:17:00 PM

This is so descriptive of the dogs…creating durress! Cool you used alliteration and colors to paint them with such realism. Golly. Cleverly penned and a joy to read! Thank you for a smile. Huggs, Pangiexx You make me grateful I have a quiet feline to snuggle with!

Regina Elliott
Date: 1/22/2024 3:30:00 PM

A big thank you, dear Pangie! When Beau and Gus go into Adrienne & Joe's bedroom for the night, they usually are quiet all night. In the yard they're keen on the squirrel chasing, lol! I'm glad you like my alliteration poem. Hugs xxooxx