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Dota: Divine Rapier

Oh~ Rapier, my holy divine Please tell me when will you be mine I can't wait much long, my divine For the scourge looms if you're not mine Oh~ Rapier, shining in the night Please be mine, even for tonight Let me wield your radiant might And as dark flees light, scourge will flight

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2015 9:13:00 PM

Jonathan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/13/2015 4:37:00 AM

- The new year is still "just a baby" .... I welcome you to P - Soup and wish you a beautiful and peaceful new year - Hope we can share many new poems this year - You write very well, Jonathan - Have a great day - // Anne-Lise :)

John Rey Canon

Date: 1/13/2015 2:21:00 AM

Really imaginative that you get inspiration from DOTA. Nice read.