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Dot To Dot

dot to dot and spot to spot the freckles splatter over my daughters face I trace the pattern gently across soft young skin and then I make a dot too with a kiss on her nose the inherited dots are part of our lineage she looks exactly like my mother did at her age and I have them too faded now through time It's an odd thing - the past and the present connecting through dots I wonder if her children will have them too

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Date: 12/30/2022 10:32:00 AM
Julie, delightfully creative take on the theme - freckles! Love it. Growing up in the summer I had freckles on my nose. They don't appear anymore. Love your last line - will freckles continue in your line! Only time will tell! Congratulations! Blessings. Happy New Year!
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Julie Draper
Date: 1/2/2023 5:14:00 PM
Thank you very much Sam, I'm pleased you enjoyed it :) Happy new year to you
Date: 12/24/2022 12:18:00 AM
Very cute, a lovely poem, congratulations
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Julie Draper
Date: 1/2/2023 5:15:00 PM
Thanks Terry, it's very kind of you to comment. A happy new year to you :)
Date: 12/22/2022 3:10:00 PM
Cute dot to dotting with freckles :) Congratulations, Julie, on 3rd place win in my contest!
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Julie Draper
Date: 12/22/2022 3:54:00 PM
Thanks very much Kim :) Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/20/2022 12:32:00 PM
this is lovely, julie! a wonderful take on the theme...
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Julie Draper
Date: 12/20/2022 8:16:00 PM
Thanks very much Ilene :) your kind feedback is appreciated :)

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