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Making my way from dot to dot A squirrel, a bunny, a kangaroo Interested in seeing what I’ve got? I won’t know until it’s through. A squirrel, a bunny, a kangaroo A galaxy of stars up in heaven, I won’t know until it's through I’ve passed five, six, and seven. A galaxy of stars up in heaven Or, perhaps, a fairy all in pink I’ve passed nine, ten, and eleven Glad I’ve pencil, not indelible ink! Or, perhaps, a fairy all in pink When I have colored what I drew Glad I’ve pencil, not indelible ink I won’t know until I get to twenty-two. When I have colored what I drew Interested in seeing what I’ve got? I won’t know until I get to twenty-two, Making my way from dot to dot.
Written December 3, 2022 Submitted to "Dot to Dot" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues [slightly modified Pantoum for children]

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Date: 12/28/2022 4:47:00 PM
An excellent Pantoum, Dear Milton - congratulations on the well-deserved First Place!
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Date: 12/28/2022 3:55:00 PM
Delightful pantoum Milt! Brings back memories of coloring books with puzzles and dot to dot drawings. Congratulations on your win! Christmas season blessings. A cup of cheer for the new year.
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Date: 12/24/2022 12:07:00 AM
An excellent Pantoum, and interpretation of the theme, a very well-deserved win
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Date: 12/22/2022 8:52:00 PM
Nicely put together pantoum, the last verse wraps up wonderfully, congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/22/2022 7:40:00 PM
So cool, Milt. Big congrats. I heard I got third place and was all excited till I saw third was for the bottom placed. Haha
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Date: 12/22/2022 2:49:00 PM
Have you tried the more intricate ones…lol! Enjoyed this, Milton! Congratulations on 1st place in my contest!
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Date: 12/6/2022 11:10:00 PM
I like every single bit of this poem but especially this part "A galaxy of stars up in heaven Or, perhaps, a fairy all in pink I’ve passed nine, ten, and eleven Glad I’ve pencil, not indelible ink!"
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Date: 12/4/2022 6:46:00 AM
Wow! This is a cool one, Milt:)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/4/2022 8:10:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jo. I appreciate it.

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