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dot dot dot you love me, you love me not yeah i get it, we are kids life is kind of like mad libs but i just can't stand this all my life with you has finally completed the fall i want to be your friend but the relationship part, has come to an end if you still like me that way then there is nothing else to say i will have to leave your life this too will cut me like a knife but until you are over me i will have to watch and see so i'm sorry but please make up your mind while all my thoughts i try to find dot dot dot i was in your life, maybe now i'm not

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/14/2009 11:46:00 AM
Oh, Jen, how sad it is that love can "cut me like a knife." Put aside your pain today and reach out to one who deserves you. Now write something uplifting so I don't have to cry on Valentine's Day. Carolyn
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Date: 2/9/2009 12:33:00 AM
Remember there's always more fish in the sea..Nice writing...Lawrence in Lou. Ky.
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Date: 2/7/2009 7:50:00 PM
Well Jen hopefully the friendship will last - God Bless, MJ
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