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Dormant Skeleton

On spooky table Lies a dormant skeleton With his skull lit up Candy surrounds the body A great treat for the fearful Russell Sivey

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/6/2012 5:55:00 AM

You make this scary tanka flow so nicely, Russell. I am spending the first part of my morning sipping tea and reading thru a dozen or so poems of yours. I am so far behind in reading my friend's great work...I also noted how you have risen to a higher level of excellence by placing rather well in these poetry contests. This is to be commended. I salute you and your love for WORDS! :) gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2012 12:05:00 PM

I like the contrast of the eerie skeleton and the sweet candies surrounding it.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2012 5:27:00 AM

That could scare a person senseless..Ha!..Good Halloween write..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Debra Squyres

Date: 8/30/2012 9:39:00 PM

Another halloween theme...spooky !!