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Doors of Death

Open up a hall of nothing And wish to peer inside With doubtful eyes and naive legs You move closer to the doors of death And I sit still, in a shadow crying such silent tears Hoping you'll turn around and that your fate will differ from theirs The stacks of skeletons I watch over, day and night For I am death's companion and friend It isn't hearts I break, its souls I help take And you shouldn't have wished you were dead Tip-toe 'Creak!' Freeze Hold thy breath and take another tiny step What is the point of this, this is the end I laugh cruelly, nothing stops me Does it reach you, send a shiver running through your fearful spine? Letting the cackle echo, I take another soul and then wait for more Shout out the words, the last the youngster will hear, I scream out: 'Idiocy is what brought you here my dear philandering fiend! To the last place you'll ever walk.'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/25/2016 6:00:00 PM
NAIL, Excellent written poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
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Date: 9/10/2011 8:32:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Nai. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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