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Door To a Wayra

Door to a wayra Behind antique doors, Memories of past treasure, Preserve for human measure, Breaking doors will damage, Have patience, each lock has a key ! Soulful springy eyes, Offered doors straight to my heart, Your name etched there permanent, An absolute abode, Only dare open up these doors ! Written on 17/7/14 By Dr. Upma A. Sharma Contest- door to a wayra Sponsor- Nette onclaud

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Date: 7/25/2014 3:06:00 PM

Well-said as I walked today, I noticed a property owner repairing a garage door that some renters had damaged - along with other damage done. There is much damage done to hearts by keeping feelings hidden and locked up inside. Enjoyed this, Dr. Upma.

Keith Robson

Date: 7/20/2014 9:27:00 AM

Your poetry is both beautiful and succint, you write very gracefully Upma...Keith.

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/17/2014 11:00:00 PM

I like this poem but am wondering what a wayra is. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/18/2014 7:11:00 AM

Thnx for visit Matthew n lovely comments,, wayra is a form if poetry,, but that was the title given,,

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/17/2014 10:35:00 PM

Oh...beautiful in every way! Romantic and sweet! I love it! :)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/17/2014 3:46:00 PM

Oh yes indeed Dr. Upma! The last lines of each verse sum this beauty up perfectly! GREAT job with this difficult form...I also like the line 'Soulful springy eyes'...What a description! Reads like a winner to me - Tim

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/18/2014 7:09:00 AM

Thnx Tim! Welcome ur visit n thorough comments // Upma//