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Door Opens

Door opens And the door shall be opened, At humanitys fall, And the thief and the beggar, hoping , That the share is for all, The evil and bad, will shamefaced be, When the great judgement comes , Comes by air, land, and sea, Conmen an shysters, all liars of course, Will be caged with the dealers, of cars and the horse, The bully so nasty will be made to feel small, And the morally corrupted will swing off one ball, If you don’t get a mention, perhaps you will be, To sit with the Righteous, in good company, Be good, be generous, where eer your gaze falls, Our Master comes bringing some taste of the gall. Sponsor Paula Swanson Contest Name Opened Doors

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Date: 9/29/2011 11:28:00 AM
Don, this might be one of your best poems! I know I might have said this before but this one trumps those by a wide margin! Very good religious write plus a great way to use the opening of the door, very clever! Again, wonderful poem!!
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Date: 9/29/2011 6:38:00 AM
Some of my poems alone will earn me a hot spot. Tony
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