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Door

I can't go in our room It's empty and full of things you discarded cigarette butts, phone numbers without names lonely things not shared but bombarded so I shut the door like I shut out your leavin me that door, it just keeps talkin might as well paint that door red I'm thinkin bout puttin my shoes on remember? with the big, clunky heels? I'm thinkin bout kickin that damn door in JUST TO SEE HOW IT FEELS Hah! Kimmy

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Date: 2/5/2009 6:02:00 PM
Kimmy - Go Girl - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/3/2009 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week, God Bless you and best wishes to you in your writing*Tyesha
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Date: 2/3/2009 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/3/2009 5:39:00 AM
I like your style and wit, Kimmy, makes me wanta smile then kick hell outa that door. Love, daver
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Date: 2/3/2009 5:11:00 AM
Congrats Kimmy on "Door" being featured. Vince
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Date: 2/1/2009 5:08:00 PM
Just put a hole in that door and maybe you'll see through it your real soul mate :) Congrats for being featured this week! Love, iolanda
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Date: 2/1/2009 2:07:00 PM
Did ya do it? Good for you if you did ... smile ... great writing here, Kim and a well-deserved selection to be a feature of the week here at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/1/2009 12:17:00 PM
Congrats on the feature this week. Looking forward to reading more of your wrok.
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Date: 2/1/2009 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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