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Doodles

DOODLES. By peter toland. Doodles is a local kid he loves to play football, he's the best I've ever seen it's like he's standing six foot tall, if you try run past him he'll always make a tackle, I really don't know what it is it's like you're in a shackle. On the surfboard he is cool he's acting like no fool, it's Like a natural thing for him like paddling at the pool. Nothing seems to scare doodles he's always on the go, his adrenalin keeps him going with the flow. Sometimes he plays a zombie a funny one at that, or maybe he will lick your face pretending he's a cat. When he is on YouTube he wants to make you see, there's lot of examples in this world where people are not free. He'll make you see that people some people really care, and he'll also show you people that really are not fair. Doodles is a good kid he wants to make you smile, that is why to see him I would certainly walk for miles. Every day I see him he learns me more and more, I could listen to him for hours it would never be a bore. I wrote this rhyme for doodles you know who you are, I'm thinking of showing it to you when I am from afar. I say this to you doodles you stand out from the crowd, you are special and unique I know all your family's proud. Now one final message I will say to doodles boy, keep on smiling doodles you give us so much joy. I think so highly of you It hurts to say goodbye, that's why I wrote this poem so it wouldn't make me cry. DOODLES is Ryan's new nickname, I think he likes it! Ryan is my nephew I wrote this poem about him!

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Date: 10/5/2015 2:21:00 PM
Hi Peter, I'm moved by your words, a very nice dedication for your Nephew Ryan. He is watching, I love how you take great pride in all he does... SKAT
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