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Whoever blushes is already guilty; true innocence is ashamed of nothing.

Jean-Jacque Rousseau

Don’t Worry Love The hot redness of her face, as if Mars, Surrounded by flashy yellow a-bright; And pure snow clouds dancing, chastefully, light. Orbit’s blush and puppy love eyes with stars. Latterly, bestie speaks it out loudly. A sudden volcanic moon of madness dries her throat, a disruption of sadness. Virginal countenance, burning brightly. Then her crush softly grabs her hand in his. “Don’t worry love. Let’s step outside,” he croons. She is startled - her cheeks begin to swoon. Fresh air cools her down. She enjoys the chills. The robins sings of lovely things - knees weak, as he brushes a kiss upon her cheek.

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Date: 5/5/2024 5:39:00 AM
"The robins sings of lovely things - knees weak, as he brushes a kiss upon her cheek." As the loved one plants a kiss, robins sing at the backdrop. Lovely ambience. A very romantic poem. I can imagine knees going weak, especially when it is a first time experience.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2024 5:53:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa! The first time you experience such lovely things! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 4/30/2024 5:41:00 PM
so lovely and romantic, as we say infrench, il n'y a pas d'amour, que des preuves d'amour, merci beaucoup pour ce délicieux poème
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2024 7:41:00 PM
Merci beaucoup, Yann! Je souris :)
Date: 4/30/2024 4:02:00 PM
a lovely romance poem...soft and touching. I liked 'the robins sings of lovely things - knees weak, as he brushes a kiss upon her cheek.' Not familiar with this form, but it looks fascinating. Will need to check it out. Have a lovely evening, Kim. hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2024 7:41:00 PM
It is a hybrid sonnet. Thank you, Sara!
Date: 4/30/2024 12:44:00 PM
Ahh!!! I like the romantic lines penned. Way to go. I don't think I have seen this form used before. I will have to look it up. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2024 2:11:00 PM
I don’t remember seeing so I am now in love with it…gives a sonnet a little elbow room :)
Date: 4/30/2024 10:10:00 AM
What imagery- all of it is beautiful, different. You're a true poetess with a true gift, I am privileged to read.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2024 10:36:00 AM
I am so appreciative of your encouragement, dear Poetess!
Date: 4/30/2024 9:10:00 AM
This is soooo neautuful. Youy are a master of imagery and cab express human ention with dekucaby and unique phrases. Amazing how your words are like a paint brush. One can feel the loving interactions in the poem., thanks to your artistry. Pangie xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2024 9:22:00 AM
I appreciate you, Pangie! Feeling encouraged!
Date: 4/30/2024 7:58:00 AM
It is great to see you trying different forms, I have not done this one.. I liked the rhymes in this one.. Flows really well..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2024 9:25:00 AM
I love that I found this form! It gives the room to write a free-er sonnet! Thank you so much. Nice, that with a hybronnet you can do some slant rhymes. There are some words that have only one or no true rhymes. Hugs ~ Kim (Thank you for the encouragement!)
Date: 4/30/2024 7:53:00 AM
Oh, what a sigh escapes from me after reading this one, Kim. Love it and your new photo. Are those Mardi Gras beads around your necks? You know I'm in New Orleans, right?
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/30/2024 11:45:00 AM
Great, Kim. It would be wonderful to meet you here.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2024 9:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Lin! We weren’t in New Orleans but we were at a party. My sis is doing her 60th in New Orleans. I cannot come but if I do for some reason, I will let you know!! My grands most likely are coming to visit. Priorities.

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