Get Your Premium Membership

Don'T Tread On Me

You can cuss and rant and rave, you can even burn Old Glory Disrespecting those who gave throughout Her entire story And You can put her down in trying to toss Her Spirit aside Even publicly tarnish Her Crown, for all your lack of pride You can tread upon Her name upon all the sacrifices made Being so filled with shame in this pool which you now wade Call Her every name in your book and even thumb your nose Even that disgusting look and complaining about all your woes Yeah you can complain all day long about how She wasn't fair And about how everything is all wrong and that only you care You can spit upon each Shred as you rip Her piece to piece Even cursing our very dead but one day... it will all cease One day She won't be there she'll take her freedom and leave Perhaps that day you will care the day you sit there and grieve The day your freedom was taken away and you finally realize When She doesn't have Her say everything else in your life dies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/11/2018 3:31:00 PM
So much said in this poem.We should respect those who love us..We should show them we care..before they give up on us..and go find someone else who give them what we we then can't..Because its too late .Loved reading your poem .Its all about gratitude ,appreciation and respect .
Login to Reply
Flannery Avatar
Vincent Flannery
Date: 9/11/2018 5:08:00 PM
Yes, Charmaine. As they say warts and all. Because you don't realize how much it means till it's not there. No one is perfect but God Himself.
Date: 7/7/2018 9:35:00 PM
Hi Vincent.. We live in a crazy, sometimes scary, world of reality. But here on this page is another world.. one of wonder, creativity, adventure, and imagination. Stoping in and checking out your skillful write is the highlight of my day!
Login to Reply
Flannery Avatar
Vincent Flannery
Date: 7/9/2018 1:01:00 PM
Thank You Lyric Man for your kind comments. It sure is a crazy world out there. we all definitely need to take a break sometimes. Take care of yourself and have a great week.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things