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Don'T Rush

if i lie, i lie away from here if i die, i'll walk pass this wall the wall shows me i was clear i do not rush in love i do not wish to fall. if i say, i say with meanings if i tell, i tell you the truth the truth holds my misery my reason for the wait to wait a little longer for you so i do not rush under the night sky kiss me if you want but don't get high take your hands off me but feel my cheeks i'll let you see deep into my eyes until we'll fall asleep and i do not rush in the sunset if you just hold my hand, then i'll be glad. i just don't want to stay alone in here. because if i die, i'll see this wall. this wall showed i was clear. so i do not rush now. i'll just lie .. here.

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Date: 2/21/2009 9:36:00 AM
Eric, great work! You're wise not to rush into expressing feelings. Many people hurt others when they express passions of the moment that are not based on truth. I look forward to reading more of your work! Love, Carolyn
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