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Don'T Quit Your Daydream

Nagging still is the voice of inspiration Coming from somewhere beyond and above, Listen not to the call for hesitation... Even if it comes from someone that you love Drown out the doubters, all 'round you they hum For nothing is impossible in our world today, Looking at how far humanity has come No daydream is as silly as they say... Keep a promise to you, and you alone When cold reality slaps you wide awake, Don't quit your daydream or postpone What little risk it would be to take For this is how the seeds begin to grow When lonesome times fuel ideas to spark, Into the sullen hours, let imaginations go Don't quit your daydream, even after dark. (11/26/2022)

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Date: 12/4/2022 11:39:00 AM
Ahh!! Just keep on dreaming because if you change those dreams to goals there is a possibility that they will come into being. Seems like there might be a contest with this theme if so, this one reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my pages. Sara
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/30/2022 3:56:00 PM
Thank you, too, Sara... and yes, I had written this one for Craig's contest... I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it...
Date: 12/1/2022 6:24:00 PM
Poetry or advice? Can't choose which.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/27/2022 10:26:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poem... I appreciate that, John...
Date: 11/29/2022 11:49:00 AM
W Wonderful advice, we’re never told to do a dream. Kelly, enjoyed reading. Blessings my friend.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/8/2022 10:07:00 AM
Thank you Eve... Glad you enjoyed this one, my friend...
Date: 11/28/2022 5:57:00 AM
Great advice, Kelly, a nicely written piece for the contest. Best of luck. John
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/8/2022 9:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, John

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