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Don'T Let Your Pitter Patter

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I once met a Spanish high flyer She wiggled and danced on a wire Her pitter once pattered Grew ninety pounds fatter And now she sings bass in a choir. Feb 4 2020 Daniel Turner

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 5/4/2021 6:51:00 PM

Hahaha this made me smile

Terry Flood

Date: 5/2/2021 3:35:00 AM

I love a good Limerick... and that’s a good and hilarious Limerick. Thanks for introducing yourself through my poems, I see rhyme is as important to you as it is to me. Terry

Daniel Turner
Date: 5/2/2021 5:34:00 AM

Yes. It is my belief that the rhyming and rhythm of a poem are what people mostly remember. If it's easy to read. It gives it more of a sense of familiarity. Thank you from dropping by Terry.

Fj Thomas

Date: 1/16/2021 5:15:00 PM

Lol silly man! How are you Daniel?

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/21/2020 6:03:00 PM

Crazy good Dan’l...

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/18/2020 10:40:00 AM

You made me lol!

Anna Hopper

Date: 3/8/2020 9:29:00 AM

Lol! Great

Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/25/2020 9:00:00 PM

Well-penned. Enjoyed. Blessing

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/22/2020 8:53:00 PM

I'm applauding in Virginia - excellent limerick! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/22/2020 11:27:00 PM

It was easy because MY pitter pattered and I am fatter but now I'm just flattered:) Hello You. Thank you for the flowers:)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/18/2020 6:49:00 AM

Congratulations..belated though it be. I adore your limerick Panagiota xx The validation code for this was HAH! Funnnneee

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2020 10:18:00 AM

Thank you, Panagiota. I am glad I made you laugh.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/17/2020 2:45:00 PM

Very, very cute, from the title to the very last word. Smiles, Gershon

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/17/2020 4:03:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon:)

Joseph May

Date: 2/16/2020 8:34:00 PM

lol, The fAt lady always sings, Nicely done Daniel

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2020 10:37:00 PM

LOL I love to hear fat ladies sing. Thank you Joseph.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 2/12/2020 1:29:00 PM

Nice one!! Congrats!!

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2020 10:36:00 PM

Thank you Krish

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 2/12/2020 9:46:00 AM

This happens to all of us in time, high fliers or not. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for the stop by. / M

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2020 10:36:00 PM

Thank you, Maurice.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2020 3:45:00 PM

this is just wonderful, Danny boy!! Congrats in the contest.

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2020 10:36:00 PM

Thank you Andrea:)

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/11/2020 9:39:00 AM

Hi Daniel, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/11/2020 9:51:00 AM

Thank you Alexis. You are very kind:)

Charles Messina

Date: 2/10/2020 4:46:00 PM

Great limerick, Dan. Congrats on your win!

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/10/2020 6:14:00 PM

Thank you Charles. I appreciate your kindness.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/10/2020 4:16:00 PM

Great limerick, Daniel.. we get older metabolism drops and the weight gain. Sorry for your loss of your brother a pain that doesn't heal. I lost my babysister at 21 , 40 years ago and I still replay the day she passed. Aneurysm in brain, laughing one minute drinking a glass of wine next half hour gone. Thank your for congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/10/2020 6:13:00 PM

Thank you Eve. My brother died of Hodgkin's lymphoma. He was my hero.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/10/2020 2:33:00 PM

Dan, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute and clever limerick!

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/10/2020 3:54:00 PM

Thank you Tania. I love these limerick contests because I love to laugh. Great job!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/10/2020 1:36:00 PM

Just stopping back with congratulations!

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/10/2020 1:38:00 PM

Thank you, Carolyn. People are going to start to talk:) lol

John Watt

Date: 2/10/2020 1:30:00 PM

Daniel, fun humor and great rhymes. Congrats ~ John

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/10/2020 1:32:00 PM

Thank you, John. I love limericks but this being a family oriented site, one must keep them clean:)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/10/2020 12:11:00 PM

Fabulous humour DT so glad to see this on the winners list, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/10/2020 1:31:00 PM

Thank you Jan. You're a sweetheart:)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/10/2020 11:21:00 AM

I'm back with CONGRATS, Danny! Janice

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/10/2020 1:44:00 PM

Says a lot about the type of person you are Janice. That is very thoughtful and kind and I appreciate your support. Did you guys get any winter at all over there? None here!