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Don'T Let Her Steal Your Heart Away

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Like a thief in the night she stole your heart But I’ve seen the way you look at her ... It was simply love at first sight She has curves in all the right places You simply can’t keep your hands off her I can no longer compete for your attention Ladies.... Why do we have to suffer when men get a new car! 12th August 2015

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James Fraser

Date: 10/10/2015 2:56:00 PM

Your range is wonderful Jan xx Phew, Haha! I don't drive. My purse is for different curves that so deserve for I to serve. But she sure drives me crazy in my heart / hugs // James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2015 2:58:00 PM

I love writing with a twist James and this was one of those poems crying out for a twist - so glad the love of your life has those curves to drive you crazyyyyyyyyyyy:-) hugs jan xx

Mama Bear

Date: 8/17/2015 10:11:00 AM

Imagine being replaced by a car. Hope it was a new model LOL their life expectancy is not great. He will pay for that rejection but not too much I hope Loved the laugh Love and hugs Edith Richard had the right answer clever man

Jan Allison
Date: 8/17/2015 12:02:00 PM

Richard is a very wise man indeed Mama bear - thanks for the lovely comment:-) purely a fiction write I was in a hotel room in Dublin when I wrote this lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Cottrell

Date: 8/17/2015 8:39:00 AM

Interesting way of putting it. Very nice poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/17/2015 8:44:00 AM

Thanks James:-) hugs jan xx

Rachel Preston

Date: 8/13/2015 4:34:00 PM

Roald Dahl strikes again with the twist :-) xx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2015 4:39:00 PM

My next one isn't at all twisted lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Edlynn Nau

Date: 8/13/2015 2:44:00 AM

Thanks for making me chuckle! I was surprised at the end and was off guard for the curve you threw! Dead mans curve! Fun!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/17/2015 12:00:00 PM

You can edit your comments Edlynn - go to member area at the top left of the page and 'my outboxes' and you can amend your comments there:-) hugs Jan xx

Edlynn Nau
Date: 8/13/2015 6:09:00 PM

Flash: they SERIOUSLY need an Edit Option HERE! Should read (below) I LOVE fun surprises! OCD! I hate typos, spelling errors, grammar errors. Please call me on those. I encourage it. We must be each other's editors! I WANT an edit here! Sigh!

Edlynn Nau
Date: 8/13/2015 6:06:00 PM

Well I life fun surprises and who doesn't enjoy a laugh! That element of surprise ALWAYS strikes fear or laughter!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2015 7:18:00 AM

Thanks Edlynn I do like to write the odd poem with a twist at the end:-) Hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/12/2015 8:57:00 AM

Ha ha, that was a pleasant surprise!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2015 9:21:00 AM

Oh I love your reply to Nette - you are a VERY wise man Richard! :-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/12/2015 8:23:00 AM

guys adore their cars more than any woman... that's for sure; an automobile will always be a part of them, lol... you stunned me; nice, jan.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/12/2015 9:00:00 AM

I enjoy cars but I enjoy the beautiful curves of my sweetie far more. I've traded in many cars but will never stop loving and cherishing my sweetie.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2015 8:51:00 AM

Just a fiction write Nette - but I can imagine it would hit home with some women ... and how can you compete with those curves ... unless they get dented lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/12/2015 7:41:00 AM

I was about to pontificate about the inability of a woman to steal a heart....men willingly give it, when you turned the tables on me, Jan. Good one!!! Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2015 8:50:00 AM

Just a fun write Eileen - its total fiction by the way - iwrote it in our hotel room last night lol:-) hugs jan xx

Shane Cooper

Date: 8/12/2015 4:25:00 AM

Hi Jan, yeah you got me too. Your one clever tricksy lady. Your poetry rocks !,!!!! LOL ANOTHER INTO FAVOURITES AND OF COURSE A 7 love Shane xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2015 4:30:00 AM

Thanks Shane - It's all total fiction we are actually in a hotel in Dublin at the moment - just have to go with the flow of my muse:-) hugs Jan xx

Ian Jones

Date: 8/12/2015 2:24:00 AM

lol! Boys and toys I think they term it as being in touch with your inner child not to mention justifying spending extra on what you wanted rather than what you needed. Ha Ha! Kind regards, Ian

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2015 2:55:00 AM

Just a fun write Ian we are actually staying in a hotel in Dublin at the moment - total fiction on my part:-) Hugs Jan xx

Theresa Cw

Date: 8/12/2015 12:05:00 AM

Ha ha ha!! ya gave me a great chuckle at the end Jan, I was expecting that kind of ending.... hugs Theresa

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2015 2:54:00 AM

Thanks Theresa:-) hugs jan xx

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/11/2015 9:30:00 PM

you got me, great twist

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2015 2:54:00 AM

Thanks Frederic i do appreciate your support:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/11/2015 6:59:00 PM

ha! very funny, jan! you are a master at these sneaky endings!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2015 2:51:00 AM

I love to have fun with them Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/11/2015 6:45:00 PM

lol...nice twist Jan...that will be me in a few months...haven't had that since my Mustang convertible had to get rid of it after the first kid...2 car seats wouldn't fit...lol

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2015 2:51:00 AM

You know me for being twisted Tim - am actually sitting in a hotel room in Dublin ... our mode of transport is our feet and the bus lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/11/2015 6:38:00 PM

take the keys when he's asleep and put some miles on those tires! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2015 6:43:00 PM

Total fiction write Cas lol I am actually sitting in a hotel room in Dublin lol:-) hugs jan xxx