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Don'T Go Out Tonight

Don't go out tonight If there's a full moon in the sky You may never come back alive When the ravens nightly fly Never look to the moon When they silhouette their shape You'll be left with lunar blind Your eyes in a darkened drape Don't go out tonight If there's a full moon in the sky Unless you have no reason to return Then if that's the case, you'll die http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/dark-4.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/27/2010 12:28:00 PM
Great write and scary...Sara
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Date: 7/26/2010 1:04:00 PM
Beware . .James this is scary,i'm not going out and i think i'm not gonna sleep either :)C.C
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Date: 7/26/2010 4:45:00 AM
I love this dark piece James, glad I read it during the day hehe, hope you're having an awesome Monday bb Wilma
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Date: 7/26/2010 12:24:00 AM
Okay, okay, I definitely won't go out tonight! Very dark James, great imagery, loads of atmosphere, and one girlie hiding behind the sofa, haha ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/25/2010 8:13:00 PM
Very awesome write.
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Date: 7/25/2010 11:51:00 AM
This would be a terrifc entry for the Halloween contest which will be on the scene soon ..James.. very nice and eerie write full of suspense and imagery.. enjoyed.. with luv..
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