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Don'T Give Up

Your face is lined in pain your eyes are filling with tears your heartbeats are echoing with grief your breaths are heaving with deep sighs Your sorrow is wearing your strength your despair is breaking you down your will is dissolving weakening your resolve your mind is troubled over many things You feel so alone and helpless you are drowning in misery from your mistakes unable to get up and pull yourself the mess you are in is so grave and deep Living becomes a burden for you your mind is cage unable to break free you feel like giving up and just let go ending your life seems the easy way But wait! cried a voice inside your head it's not too late to make up and start anew these things will all come to pass don't lose hope we can get through In a rush of feelings you come alive break down in tears and rock by sobs how wrong it was to just give up on living when there's a way to get out of this rut Life is a journey with many paths my friend when life gets you down don't give up just bend lift up your hands and seek for God's mercy He will answer your call and for you He'll make a way

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Date: 1/31/2015 4:45:00 PM
When is the last time god did anything for anybody ? Except in self delusion ! All powerful ! Maybe his power lives in you ! Dream on !
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