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Don'T Forget Daddy

Don't forget Daddy.. I know that Daddy used to see you daily But it's only on occasion lately And "lately" starts to feel like "forever" Daddy thought things would have already been better Yet it seems as he begins to rise from the ashes Something happens & he just crashes Falling further than before But don't forget that Daddy is still climbing Because you three girls are all he adores I know our time together has grown far and few But he is always thinking of you Sometimes daddy doesn't always know what to do But don't forget he'll always be there for you I know daddy used to work hard to keep a roof over your head But now someone else has been instead I wish daddy could answer your when? & why's Just don't forget that he still tries I know daddy has no home and no bed He sleeps under an open sun roof because the battery is dead So tonight the rain falls in Ironically working as a disguise that hides The tears that insist on escaping his eyes Yeah I know daddy lied when he said he never cries But don't forget daddy holds himself together for you guys I know daddy used to unite our family Now it feels he's torn it apart again single handedly But daddy still fights for that life And if for some reason we're not there before he dies Please don't forget that Daddy loves you More than words can describe

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Date: 5/10/2016 9:50:00 PM
nice to see this one again. linda
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Date: 9/8/2014 6:29:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Creed - I choose your first great and moving written poem in rhyme - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/6/2014 10:46:00 AM
Wow this is a very touching piece which is excellently written! Well done! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and continue to churn out these poetic gems! Pandita
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Date: 9/5/2014 9:13:00 PM
Hello Creed,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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