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Dont Exhume School

Swimming in mire of memory, Searching the fish of forgetfulness, Those are not the good days; Nervous eyes will get attacked, Leaving residue of a small heart, Beat the soft cheeks like egg; Hands smack the sensitive back, Infernal, Thrashed till tears, Suspense of demonic destruction, Climax of nervy showers, Bringing noises of home to job, Ruthlessly pulling off frustrations; Child became a punching bag; Explanation of sparing the rod, Rooms; never to go torture spaces, Chiron of Greece will feel ashamed; His passions going for putrefaction, Witches with too many potions; Heating the young blood for evil; Then go home riding on brooms, Satisfied without such education; Sweated a lot digging deep; A metallic coffin from hell, Burying the days of horror, Don’t exhume those days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/12/2016 9:53:00 PM
SAMPRATYA PATHAK,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/10/2016 11:07:00 PM
Sampratya, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 6/10/2016 1:54:00 PM
- A sad first poem,but well written Sampratya - I hope there will be more in the future :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup:) - I wish you a beautiful weekend - hugs // Sun :)
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Date: 6/10/2016 8:03:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Sampratya. :)
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