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Dont Drink and Drive

HE FOUND IT HARD TO CARRY ON THE CYCLE OF HOPE AND DISAPPOINTED GOT TO HIM JEOPARDIZED HIS EQUILIBRIUM HIS ABILITY TO GO ON THE WEARINESS WAS SWALLOWING HIM UP HE WOULD PASS ANY ATTEMPT HE HAD MADE TO PRETEND TOO EXHAUSTED TO FIGHT OFF THE DEMONS THAT STOLE HIS FAITH HE INDICATED A LOSS OF CONFIDENCE NO EMOTIONS WERE ATTACHED TO HIS WORDS HE WAS IMAGINING A LIFE HE'LL NEVER KNOW A WARMTH AND SECURITY THAT WILL NEVER BE HIS AGAIN NEAR INSANITY HAD TAKING HIM OVER HE TRIED TO ACCEPT HE WAS AN IMPERFECT MAN LIVING IN AN IMPERFECT WORLD BUT HE COULDNT FAILURE ABOUNDED HE LOST HIS COMPASSION HER ABSENCE MADE THINGS TOUGH HE TRIED TO PRETEND HIS HEART WASNT CRYING EVERY SECOND OF THE DAY THE CHILL IN THE AIR MADE HIM FEEL NUMB HE COULDNT FORGET THAT HORRIBLE NIGHT WILL HE EVER BE ABLE TO FORGIVE HIMSELF IS IT EVER GONNA BE THE SAME HE POURS HIMSELF ANOTHER DRINK AND DRIVES AWAY!!

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Date: 6/4/2009 1:10:00 PM
Great poem Brandy, far too many commit this crime and destroy someones life, well written>James
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Date: 5/30/2009 9:22:00 AM
beautiful write, sad but strong, people will one day learn is all we can hope hun, well written, may they one day learn <3 madison
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Date: 5/28/2009 1:11:00 PM
This poem will speak to many people, drinking is such a pain in society. You do have a gift with the emotionl side of writing, life is the best tool to write with. Thanks for sharring. Judy Riley
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Date: 5/28/2009 10:49:00 AM
very sad but well written. Jessica
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Date: 5/28/2009 10:28:00 AM
Wow so sad but so true...so many ppl's lives are effected by these kind of preventable accidents that it's terrible...what a way to shine on this touchy subject
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Date: 5/27/2009 2:38:00 PM
This is a strong write..my coworker lost her son to a drunk driver....hearts are broken when we don't surrender the keys...good write.
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Date: 5/27/2009 1:53:00 PM
Soup mail.... Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/27/2009 1:39:00 PM
A sad write but very well done. An excellent reminder for all with this one. Smiles from Lolita
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