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Don't Cloud My Vision

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Don't Cloud My Vision

Who would you have thought me be, If I wasn't who I am? I can only change so much In one, short life-span. They say that Rome wasn't built in a day And I tend to agree, For there are many obstacles On the journey to be free. I thought that you might walk with me, But it was then I saw, That all that you turned out to be Was a mangy dog of war.

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  1. Date: 5/13/2012 12:32:00 AM
    when reality strike's...intense ink!