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Don't give me too much I'll expect to be touched With the Mind of a kind rewinding my rhyming in beats of a drum giving me something that heaven can't touch an emotional rush Baby dial it down or I'll go the round with fantasies of you all wrapped up in truth Please let me breathe or I'll have to leave you panting for more Knocking for sure on heavenly doors

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Date: 12/2/2016 1:34:00 PM
Very cool Holly, I can hear a cadence in this because I know of your admiration for rap and Eminem. Nicely done.
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Holly Bohto
Date: 12/2/2016 6:58:00 PM
just experimenting. unfinished. but like to share that process with others. thanks Chris:)

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