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Don't tell me you love me On a post it note Don't tell me you care When you just want to stare Don't tell me youre mine On the back of a dime Don't tell me to wait I've gone it's too late

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/12/2013 12:27:00 PM
just passing by again alredy comented on this one but cool write hope you find love again xxdavidscott
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Date: 1/25/2013 11:58:00 AM
Stupid fellow! Some guys don't get it till its to late. Good poem.
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 1/25/2013 3:51:00 PM
We live and learn Richard, thank you, love Elizabeth
Date: 12/14/2012 1:34:00 PM
Dear Elizabeth, I have to agree with Tim's comment there are those kind of men that hurt not only the women in thier lives but the Loving men that are out there LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/15/2012 4:56:00 AM
Yes indeed this is very true of both sexes,especially in todays society.
Date: 11/7/2012 3:59:00 PM
That's telling him Elizabeth!... Not referring to the gentleman you wrote about but some men are egotistical, insecure idiots trying to show off how many hearts they've broken and how many adoring but gullible ladies are still chasing them - Tim
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/7/2012 5:41:00 PM
Yes indeed Tim, but they will meet their match sooner or later :) thank you for your comment, love elizabeth
Date: 11/7/2012 3:28:00 PM
lol,sorry lad,Elizabeth is off and running,nice write
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/7/2012 5:38:00 PM
:) thank you Richard, love elizabeth
Date: 11/6/2012 1:34:00 PM
Sometimes us guys can be a bit dense. He must be kicking himself. You know what they say about those guys that stare!
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/6/2012 4:06:00 PM
:) indeed, love elizabeth
Date: 11/6/2012 12:43:00 PM
i agree you dont know what yohave till its gone nice write thanks for coments xx davidscott
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/6/2012 4:04:00 PM
Thank you David, love elizabeth xx
Date: 11/5/2012 1:34:00 PM
Excellent verse. Very touching and powerful, through only a few words! Always, Laura
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/5/2012 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Laura, love elizabeth
Date: 11/4/2012 7:35:00 PM
He was daft and not deft/and won't know why you left. Enjoyed your poem.
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/5/2012 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Jon, love elizabeth
Date: 11/4/2012 6:26:00 PM
words are nothing without feelings...yet they say most don't know what they have until it's gone... nice poem :)
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/4/2012 7:25:00 PM
Yes indeed we can all talk the talk, but who can walk the walk, thank you for your comment, love elizabeth

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