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When emotions are a circle of carefully placed d o m i n o e s, exposed like dandelions in a b r e e z e, empathy can be a challenge, sensing things others struggle to see. As each d o m i n o f a l l s darkness unfolds.
Illusive vultures perch upon frail shoulders, their talons digging deep into sensitive skin. Biting lips from the pain, clenching fists, tongue restrains from screaming. How it wishes to express things out loud, but plagued by a jaded misunderstood mind, it feels like a rain cloud unable to release drops of heavy burdens contained deep inside.
Sometimes I wish I could c r y, but selfish t e a r s refuse to flow, is this the definition of me now? How real is this smile you see, pretending in puddles of premeditated positivity. Like you, struggling to find answers, to so many complex questions -
in a battle between philosophies and prophecies. Are we villains, heroes, victims or victimizers? Have we touched more hearts, than we've broken? I ponder what role will I play in my last performance, which character will illustrate my story. Yet none of us will ever know.
Gathering each f a l l e n d o m i n o
I secure them in a tired timber box. for a moment my heart is safe, admiring, dandelions bloom in my flourishing orchard.

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Date: 2/3/2024 1:07:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem. I relate to that sense of awareness as an adult, that I can be the villain not the hero - selfish despite a desire to be generous, critical despite a desire to notice good. J
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Date: 2/3/2024 9:32:00 AM
Exquisite! Benefits of being a newbie to the site is discovering amazing works such as this!
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Date: 2/3/2024 1:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 11/21/2023 2:39:00 AM
What a profound and deeply moving poem this is, i remember reading this before. My son used to play dominoes and what a creative thought it is to relate it and use it as a simile for emotions and all that around this world how empathy can be challenging and sometimes so many find it hard to understand or be empathetic towards emotions suppressed or even expressed. I absolutely love your metaphors and also the opening and last lines here hits strong! This truly is an impeccable writ that flows
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Date: 11/21/2023 2:41:00 AM
In such eloquence “ Sometimes I wish I could cry, but selfish tears refuse to flow” lol i bet i cant resonate with this line cus i am quick to cry. Its ok to cry though, sometimes when overwhelmed can be challenging to cry. This poem shows your deep mindset and has a touch of philosophy and psychology of emotions. Absolutely loved reading this. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved
Date: 11/20/2023 7:04:00 PM
Such a deep write, with great lines of imagery and feelings. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/14/2020 9:37:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem, very eloquently expressed and touching.
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Silent One
Date: 10/14/2020 12:06:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 10/14/2020 8:25:00 AM
Soul searching..
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Silent One
Date: 10/14/2020 8:42:00 AM
Indeed..
Date: 10/13/2020 11:36:00 PM
A deep poem. Emotions will always be there. That is what makes life. ~~
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Silent One
Date: 10/14/2020 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Victor..
Date: 10/13/2020 6:22:00 PM
Emotions are visible, even though we try and tuck them away neatly. Feeling the "Emotions" of others (and so deeply) is a gift and also a curse. I have been able to feel the heart through words, for several years now. It is "Domino Effect" indeed. Seems you have this gift. Your poetry has your heart all the way through, in which I can feel. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 10/14/2020 8:03:00 AM
Indeed it is and it can lead to a domino effect... But we have the ability to re erect the dominoes and also dandelions always come back... Thank you Brandy
Date: 10/13/2020 4:16:00 PM
You paint a very descriptive picture, Silent One. I was pinned to the page from beginning to end. I'll definitely be back to read this one again! ~Angie
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Silent One
Date: 10/14/2020 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Angela..
Date: 10/13/2020 1:45:00 PM
Dark and gloomy yet true. Like looking in a mirror. Well expressed my friend.
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Silent One
Date: 10/14/2020 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Tim..
Date: 10/13/2020 1:25:00 PM
Neat!
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Silent One
Date: 10/14/2020 8:04:00 AM
Thanks..
Date: 10/13/2020 12:33:00 PM
I could suggest that the role you or I play in our last performances would be the same roles we've played our whole lives through. Our stories have already illustrated our character's...in the end, people will see you as the dandelion that flourished in the garden. Fantastic write SO my dear friend. CM
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Silent One
Date: 10/14/2020 8:04:00 AM
What a lovely thing to say, puts a lump in my throat.. Thank you so much..
Date: 10/13/2020 11:06:00 AM
Inner contentment and faith, the elixir to our torment.. to our unanswered questions.. to our unquenchable thirst.. definitely we are all supposed to fill a huge part in Life not a void.. beautifully affect and be genuinely affected.. connect and "touch hearts".. that's the beauty of an unpredictable life! Your profound thoughts do reach souls! Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful musing, Silent One! Best regards and blessings.
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Silent One
Date: 10/13/2020 12:13:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 10/13/2020 11:04:00 AM
In a safe haven a garden ,but in solitude.. Great write my friend. Hugs Eve
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Silent One
Date: 10/13/2020 12:13:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 10/13/2020 10:16:00 AM
Oh, I love this. I feel a sense of wanting to express things with a restriction that should not be there, but it may come from my own personal experience. I am keeping this as another FAV. Thank you :)
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Silent One
Date: 10/13/2020 12:14:00 PM
Thank you... Glad this one resonates with you..
Date: 10/13/2020 9:57:00 AM
You have used vividly descriptive figurative language to convey a message about how difficult it sometimes is to feel and show true compassion for others--during times when WE are especially troubled. Janice
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Silent One
Date: 10/13/2020 12:15:00 PM
That is one way you can look at, but sometimes you meet people and can't help but feel their pain... And you want to release it through your own emotions but can't.... Thank you Janice .
Date: 10/13/2020 9:40:00 AM
Often our lives are like a battlefield, we move forward but at times we get pushed back, sometimes battered and bruised but we always live to fight anothet day and hopefully one day victory will be ours. Well written S. O. Tom.
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Silent One
Date: 10/13/2020 12:15:00 PM
I couldn't have put it better myself....Great analysis.
Date: 10/13/2020 7:13:00 AM
Very expressive, creative and emotive work. Our emotions can weak havoc on ourselves and our lives and those around us. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for dropping by. I did write two versions of Suicide because I wanted to enter it in a contest but when I got it written it was not on the topic for the contest so I found another contest and tweaked it a little to fit that contest. LOL..I am okay. Sara
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Silent One
Date: 10/13/2020 8:25:00 AM
Thank you Sara, glad you are OK...
Date: 10/13/2020 7:06:00 AM
For me your poetry is very readable. Just the right amount of poetic description to get the point across. You have a talent for this, as shown in this poem.
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Silent One
Date: 10/13/2020 8:25:00 AM
Thank you James..
Date: 10/13/2020 6:56:00 AM
This feels deep my friend--pondering life's complexities. Quite an emotive expression of struggles we face..sometimes without answers. The two ending stanzas sum it up nicely.
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Silent One
Date: 10/13/2020 6:57:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, wanted to use the domino effect as a way to describe emotions, how fragile they are like dandelions... We do not have the answers and we do not know what will happen in life, but we have the power to re erect those dominoes and dandelions always grow back...
Date: 10/13/2020 6:50:00 AM
I think we are all the things you describe. Human beings are a complicated uncomplicated lot. I enjoyed the domino effect this has on my mind.
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Silent One
Date: 10/13/2020 6:52:00 AM
Yes you are spot on and nice to see you my friend.. Hope all is well...
Date: 10/13/2020 6:28:00 AM
Not easy these days, being upon this earth, even the rich are never happy, but are we now reaping what was sown 40 years ago i wonder., One of the positives i find is the amazing poetry, being produce today, i believe you are up there with the very best. certainly this poem reflex my point.
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Silent One
Date: 10/13/2020 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Harry, but why 40 years ago? I appreciate your very kind compliment...
Date: 10/13/2020 5:25:00 AM
This is a true inspiration from the soul. I love it so.. definitely a fave! What a joy and blessing to read such a prolific and proficient writer! You soar above the clouds, dear friend, a beautiful dream inspiring those of us who find ourselves reading your heartfelt reflections! God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
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Silent One
Date: 10/13/2020 6:43:00 AM
Once again thank you for your support and sweet words and for faving this... Sometimes our emotions are like dominoes, but we always know we can erect those dominoes again and dandelions will always grow again...

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