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Doing Time

I know I did wrong I committed a crime That’s why I’m here just doing my time Alone in a room behind a locked door With stains on the wall and dirt on the floor Four bars on the window there’s not much to see For breaking the law looked what happened to me I miss all my friends and my family as well For doing wrong I am locked in a cell One little room with a pan and a sink You couldn’t imagine ho what a stink I can’t wait for the day that comes to an end Why no visits V.O’s I did send For what I had done I had a lesson to learn Just sitting and waiting to hear the key turn I’m telling you this so listen to me For breaking the law behind bars you will be

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Skat A

Date: 1/26/2016 11:06:00 AM

TANYA, Excellent read. Great flowing piece. Have a nice day. ** SKAT **

Tanya Canning

Date: 4/15/2015 10:42:00 AM

THANKS for great comments I look forward to being part of such a friendly community!! I hope my post will be enjoyed by all..... I try write in such a way that they are easy to read and easy understand. as have seen on some other poetry sites some of the words I could not even pronounce let alone understand lol and I find that the way I write they are enjoyed by many.. whatever level of education they may have

Daisy Marie Yant

Date: 4/15/2015 8:53:00 AM

You are great for the Soup. Good poetic message. Much Love

Tanya Canning
Date: 4/15/2015 10:45:00 AM

Thank you for your most encouraging comment and look forward to posting more and following others and looking forward to reading some fantastic writes !!!

Suburban Lovechild

Date: 4/13/2015 10:07:00 PM

Very insightful into a world we hope we all avoid (or never return to). Thanks for sharing, great write.

Tanya Canning
Date: 4/15/2015 10:48:00 AM

Thank you your comment it comments like yours ad many others that make writing a great pleasure thank you