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Try doing that with your wheelchair. Let's see how ' unharmed'  you emerge :D

My hands, smelly, brown, it's truly heinous... I love those dogs, I do! But it's dubious I'll ride my wheels again through grass! Clean after them please? I'm simply FURIOUS...

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Date: 11/25/2016 11:01:00 PM
nice verse on dogs.. congrats on being selected
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Darren White
Date: 11/25/2016 11:57:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 11/25/2016 2:31:00 PM
Darren, I love dogs too but it is a problem at my apartment building also, very selfish of those dog owners to not clean up, and congratulations on having your poem selected as a Feature Poem this week.
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Darren White
Date: 11/25/2016 2:39:00 PM
And yes, dog owners sometimes. ... Not everyone though fortunately.
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Darren White
Date: 11/25/2016 2:36:00 PM
Thank you, Broken Wings :)
Date: 11/22/2016 9:37:00 AM
I can relate. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Darren White
Date: 11/22/2016 9:39:00 AM
Thanks, just wish that it weren't this angry poem they chose, I love my wheels, I hate (sometimes the darn) dogs ;)
Date: 11/21/2016 1:16:00 AM
LOL, that just THIS poem is chosen to be featured on Soup's home page for this week is hilarious :D I wrote it because I was angry, hahahahaha!
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Date: 9/6/2016 10:41:00 PM
Cute... Your poem should be classified as Rubai not Rubaiyat. If you have more than one quatrain then it becomes Rubaiyat.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/12/2016 5:22:00 PM
I realized that you change the form.. this is a very cute poem
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Darren White
Date: 9/6/2016 10:43:00 PM
I know, I am still working on the remaining three rubaiyat, for the contest ;)
Date: 9/6/2016 11:23:00 AM
Oh dear Darren - this is an issue I feel strongly about ... I've written many poems about poop or many poop poems I'm not sure lol one of my faves is the dog pooh fairy lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 9/6/2016 11:34:00 AM
LOL Jan :) Yep, and then wheel home first before you can wash your hands and clean that chair. Hahaha, found that limerick of yours, so funny! Darren xxx

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