Doggone Line

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4/29/2024 for Picture Prompt Poetry Contest sponosored by Margarita Lillico

Concert tickets were a fabulous gift, But this bathroom line has me quite miffed. Next time, I won't wait to "go" Until after the show When I go out to see Taylor Swift.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/30/2024 5:56:00 AM

hilarious and a creative write for the current Limerick contest. Best wishes with this entry in the contest. Still laughing. enjoy your day, Sara

David Crandall
Date: 4/30/2024 3:46:00 PM

Thanks Sara. I read a few of the others, and a lot of them are pretty good, including yours. Good luck!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/30/2024 2:21:00 AM

Great Limerick David, a pee in showtime saves waiting in line… Beryl

David Crandall
Date: 4/30/2024 3:40:00 PM

Thanks Beryl, and ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure! :-)