Doggie Dog World

This one goes to the one I love

WHY?  Don’t you fetch, roll over, and play dead

WHO knows I might just give you a Doggie bone

WHEN I saw you last night, you were not alone

WHAT an ugly sight, of him at your home

WHERE our names you carved in stones

Seeing you with him must have fallen into your bag of trick.
Please do not call me on my phone
I wipe my paws off you
Sit, stay put, and leave me the hell alone
For you I have no more Doggie treats
Beg all you want, go Ho” yourself on another streets
The final thing is
A dog is a dog, I will be a dog.
A  b*tch, well you are a B*TCH !
Attack someone else’s kibbles on your leash
Since you cannot be a faithful or obedient tramp
Go give someone else your fleas 
Thanks for showing me this is a 
  DOGGIE DOG WORLD
You will no longer wear my tags.
With a collar, that labels you as my girl.

**Phil J.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 5/9/2010 3:44:00 PM
lol, whoa. strangely written, though i loved it. lol.
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Date: 5/7/2010 6:05:00 PM
lol.hmm, i bet she just loved your doggie tricks.keep it up, just like this, ha ha -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/30/2010 10:06:00 AM
CUTE , BEG ROLL OVER AND PLAY DEAD,, WE ALL LEARN SOONER THAN LATER,,IRMA
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Date: 4/30/2010 9:21:00 AM
sit lay cool out wow what a write calm down take a breath for you have released thanks for your comments and best wishes to you in your life hope you have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:40:00 PM
bark bark! i am sorry i find this funny i can not help but laugh,..p.d.
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:32:00 PM
Nice expressions
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Date: 4/29/2010 7:58:00 PM
Boy do I know this feeling. Divorced two years ago, and the first year we could not even speak on the phone. She cheated after 19 years of marriage and i was highly ticked off! Great vent!
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Date: 4/29/2010 7:04:00 PM
:( great poem...and a great venting of your feeling Baby Boy...Keep up the great work. Love Destiny
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