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Dog With a Fishbone

Dog with a fish bone She wants me now She wants me not She wants no one else to have me She wants me to care She wants me to appreciate her But, she doesn't want to let me in She wants me But she wants me not She wants my attention She wants my time She's even jealous of other women But, she doesn't want anything to do with me She wants me now She wants me not She's like a dog with a fish bone Can't have me, can't let me go.

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Skat A

Date: 3/19/2016 12:23:00 AM

Sumit Sharma, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2016 10:27:00 AM

Sumit, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Sumit Sharma
Date: 3/17/2016 10:43:00 AM

Thanks for the warm welcome. I will check out your posts and the contests. Lets see. This was a today thing. I'm looking for others that I can post.