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Dog Days

Dog days pass slowly air is thick but there ain't no miracle waitin funnel cloud on horizon and we’re still in Kansas, friend.

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Date: 8/29/2014 9:35:00 PM
Made me think of the wizard of oz. I've never been to kansas, I'd be afraid of the weather. good tanka though, I like this form, its still pretty new to me, but it says so much in so little.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 8/30/2014 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Casarah, yes the form is new to me as well but is interesting in that it allows just a little more than haiku.
Date: 8/12/2014 10:01:00 PM
Well penned Dave...
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 8/13/2014 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Joseph

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