Dog-Tired

Walk dog In fog Can't see Bump tree Fell down Face frown Sore head Cut bled Now lost Bit cross In pain Slow gain Came rain More bane Wet through Cold blue Mud slip Pulled hip Found path Mad laugh Walk more Still sore Long roam Got home Deep sighed Dog-tired Red wine All mine 05.11.20

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Peter Dome

Date: 12/8/2020 9:56:00 AM

Haha. love it!. Hope it's not true of course so clever and visual. well done. Take care. Pete.

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/7/2020 10:58:00 PM

Love these, Emilia, so cleverly written.

Emilia James
Date: 11/9/2020 4:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Harry, happy that you enjoyed them, Emilia : )

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/7/2020 6:16:00 PM

Cute story, remarkably penned in footle form... Enjoy the wine! : gw

Emilia James
Date: 11/9/2020 4:03:00 AM

Thank you Gershon, love the footle, the wine went down a treat lol, Emilia : )

James Inman

Date: 11/7/2020 5:33:00 PM

I don't know whether to laugh or cry with you Emilia. Nicely done.

Emilia James
Date: 11/9/2020 3:59:00 AM

Thank you James, Either or both is fine, I cry and/or laugh at myself often as I do tend to get myself in quiet a few predicaments lol, Emilia : )

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/6/2020 4:07:00 PM

Love these, Emilia.. Pangie xxx 2nd comment)))

Emilia James
Date: 11/7/2020 1:41:00 AM

Thank you again Pangie, hope you are keeping well, Emilia : )

Silent One

Date: 11/6/2020 4:05:00 AM

You did these really well Emilia...

Emilia James
Date: 11/6/2020 2:58:00 PM

Thank you Silent One, is a form I seem to be more comfortable with, Emilia : )

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/6/2020 12:59:00 AM

I see you've got the bug Emilia, great string of footles. Tom

Emilia James
Date: 11/6/2020 2:57:00 PM

Thank you Tom, first one was a while back then suddenly two in a row which is a bit like our buses lol, this was a little bit longer originally but then decided to shorten it, Emilia : )

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/5/2020 9:22:00 PM

A fun and fantastic set of footles, Emilia. I enjoyed the journey.. I don't blame you for keeping the red wine for yourself ;) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Emilia James
Date: 11/6/2020 2:51:00 PM

Thank you Susan, I don't normally drink all the wine but felt I deserved it this time lol, thank you for stopping by and commenting, Emilia : )

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/5/2020 5:46:00 PM

Darling FOOTLES, Emila.... Grand job! Pangie ee

Emilia James
Date: 11/6/2020 2:47:00 PM

Thank you Pangie, I had a roll with the footles with writing two in a row, pleased that you liked this one, Emilia : ) xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/5/2020 3:22:00 PM

Hello Emilia … a fun set of footles that tell your predicament very well indeed - thanks Emilia - Lindsay

Emilia James
Date: 11/6/2020 2:44:00 PM

Hi Lindsay and thank you, even the unlucky days don't put me off doing the things I enjoy I tend to try laugh them off and carry on. Emilia : )

Jan Allison

Date: 11/5/2020 3:08:00 PM

oh I love the ending with wine not whine after the fall, fun string of footles:-) hugs Jan xx

Emilia James
Date: 11/6/2020 2:37:00 PM

Thank you Jan, I have been known to walk into branches of trees and have slipped in the mud many times, I am quiet an accident prone person and that is before any wine lol, Emilia : )