Does Death Dream

They would probably be called “Daymares” And the Devil will Dance with the Wolf mares And the Wolf Mares in Moonlight, Dance with Mankind We close our Eyes, and turn away “to the “ HEAVEN “ We are Blind YOURS ALWAYS and FOREVER…HG ( Harry ) To Be Continued

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/3/2011 9:03:00 AM

your series on tears heals the soul, HG... gushing expo of the theme. impressed! :) huggs, nette

Constance La France

Date: 4/2/2011 6:11:00 PM

You do these dream poems and the tears poems so well, I think you have found your poetic voice with these, just wonderful~~

Elaine George

Date: 3/31/2011 6:27:00 PM

Hi Harry, Thank you for letting me know you received my entry. Yes! it is so difficult to judge these contest as there are so many talented poest on this site. I just posted a poem you might like entitled, 'How a Blue Rose Came to be" I wrote it for a contest, but didn't finish it in time to enter before the deadline, but I posted it anyhow. Take care and be well my friend. Elaine

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/31/2011 12:55:00 PM

Profound and brilliantly written. Dear Harry, this reaches me to the core. Miss you and will write you soon. Love always, shar xoxo

Rick Parise

Date: 3/31/2011 9:04:00 AM

Thanks for your comment!!!!~your poem really brings one to ponder...............I enjoyed~Rick

James Foulk

Date: 3/31/2011 8:34:00 AM

wow, this was a really different kind of poem, and really creavtive.

Elaine George

Date: 3/31/2011 4:27:00 AM

Dear Harry, So profound! The more you write, the better you are! Keep writing my dear friend. Elaine

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/31/2011 4:21:00 AM

Nice new word Daymares you have penned, HG,

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/30/2011 9:52:00 PM

Am amazed and astounded by your perception in these lines HG my silent beau.. feeling every emotion so deeply luv.. much success with your new contest I just entered and hope u will enjoy my personification of a tear luv.. great theme.. from a great poet.. your "Sweetheart" forever and always with luv..