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Dodoitsu On Love

Tulip sobs dews in petal Winter sets at horizon Sailors' loves drift on the sea Look at the iceberg The Prince kisses the princess Birds sing love songs gods in smile Over the hills evening falls Like brocade curtains Dodoitsu - Poetry Contest Sponsor Dr.Ram Mehta Poet: Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Penned on 4th February,2015

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Date: 2/5/2015 5:44:00 AM
excellent pen rajat beautifully crafted as always dear pal
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Date: 2/4/2015 11:58:00 PM
the first line, and the last line wowooww!!! a winner for me.. :D!//olive eloisa
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Date: 2/4/2015 4:55:00 PM
this is very lovely, especially the brocade curtains!
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Date: 2/4/2015 6:24:00 AM
As Jan mentioned, lovd the final 2 lines.. beautiful write friend.... nad!
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/4/2015 10:20:00 AM
Thank you lovely friend
Date: 2/4/2015 2:30:00 AM
Lovely imagery Rajat I love the final two lines especially:-) hugs Jan good luck in the contest:-)
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/4/2015 10:21:00 AM
Thank you Jan. God bless
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/4/2015 10:20:00 AM
Thank you Jan. God bless

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