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Dodging Raindrops

In the eye of the storm brave hearts embrace Fears stirring confusion in her turbulence We recollect our mangled existence To move forward with growing resilience In her eye, the look of clarity Safe in her blink of surety In the distance hurricane winds Twirl and twist, play games with our minds In the face of such overbearing power The vortex rising higher than a tower Knees buckle and weaken as we cower The will to live tested in a baptism of fire Tempers flare as lightning signals life and death The battle of the heavens descends to earth I walk on deadly ground Life is a landmine field Listening for the chirp of the sparrow For signs of life through the cold shower We plead for her forgiveness And shelter in the ominous stillness Yet still we stand in the pool of our teardrops The cumulonimbus brewing boulders I'm yet to see the rainbow, The storm is still not over 04-Jan-2015

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Date: 6/10/2015 4:47:00 PM
Hello Thabang, good read on the tempest endured, & congrats on the placing..'
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 6/10/2015 4:49:00 PM
Thank you very much Mr. Maverick...God Bless...rgds, Tbang
Date: 6/9/2015 11:50:00 AM
Hi Thabang. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 6/9/2015 12:02:00 PM
Hi Dear SKATIE...hope all's well with you&yours. Thank you & God Bless...rgds, Thabang
Date: 6/9/2015 5:26:00 AM
wonderful imagery Thabang many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2015 7:12:00 AM
I am very much a fledging poet - I have learned so much from reading the works of others Thabang:-) Hugs jan xx
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 6/9/2015 7:06:00 AM
Hi Jan...thank u very much, I enjoy your writings so much and I've assimilated a lot from you since joining the ~soup...rgds, Thabang
Date: 6/8/2015 10:39:00 PM
powerful imagery wrapped up in this wonderful poem Thabang. Great work and congrats
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 6/9/2015 7:07:00 AM
Hi Mark...greetings, nice to make your aquaintence and thank u for the fine choice of words...rgds, Thabang
Date: 6/8/2015 8:23:00 PM
rain is wonderful Thabang congrats on placing hugs
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 6/9/2015 7:04:00 AM
Hi Shadow...thanking you again for allowing me the opportunity to partake in your contest and to share my poetry:-) rgds, Thabang
Date: 1/4/2015 2:44:00 PM
love it...the more run from the rain the deeper the soaking
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 1/5/2015 5:55:00 PM
Hi Anthony...We've all been caught in the rain...Thx! rgds, Thabang

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